FROM:
Paul Allison (07/05/02)
SUBJECT: My braided processes of
reading, writing, and Web design
Hi folks. This is a pretty long message (I can just hear my ninth graders
saying, "Why'd ya have to write a Bible?"), but I think you'll see why
below. Several weeks ago, Felicia, Sally, and I listed
for each other what we thought were "Writing Project Principles" that would
guide our work with all of you this summer. Two of these were: With first day of the Advanced Institute fast
upon us, I would like to take this opportunity to make some of my thinking
visible by describing the early stages of the process of designing of our
"Language and the Internet" Web site at MyClassSite.org/sum2002. I offer this
story of my thinking as an example of the kinds of reflective process writing we
will invite you to do this summer. When I was building the Web site, I was
impressed with how the technology or mode of Web design seemed to be intertwined
with my reading and writing processes. Sometimes researchers look at Web pages
as final products and consider how the multimedia and hypertext aspects
of a Web site play off of each other. Although such analysis is important, I
think it would also be worth considering how composing for the Web changes the
process of writing as well. For example, was the idea of starting with a
question -- which sits by itself on the opening page -- a composing decision or
a design choice? Both obviously. Then, the decision to make the letters blink?
What could that possible mean? I think I wanted to create something
flashy, over the top, unnecessary -- yet possible and typical of what
happens to words on the World Wide Web. I wanted this question to be a good
example of the new choices our students face because of their access to the Web.
How to help students to use flashy fonts and animation in expressive and
thoughtful ways is just one question that I think is worth exploring. While I was planning the "Language and the
Internet" Web site, I was reading Cyberpl@y, by Barbara Danet. On page 7,
she quotes Richard Lanham's suggestion "that when we read a digital text, we are
always looking first AT it [the text] then THROUGH it, and this oscillation
creates a different implied ideal of decorum, both stylistic and behavioral."
This makes a lot of sense to me. I tend to pay more attention to fonts and
formatting when I write for the Web than I would otherwise, and the blinking
question is one example. Another example of this notion that language on
the Web has both a meaning and a visual presence is the font I chose for around
the compass on the main page. I wanted it to be something that most people would
have to look AT before they looked THROUGH it. I searched for and found a font
that uses symbols from alphabets other than the standard 26. So that the sign
for the British pound is used for the capital "L" and the copyright symbol is
used for the capital "C". Again, I want to be clear that I didn't use this
font to frustrate or to amuse people. Instead, I consciously searched for a font
that would implicitly express something important about what the "Language and
the Internet" Web site is all about. Similarly, I put a lot of thought behind the
overall design of the main page as well. I got the idea of using a matrix with a
compass at the origin point (0,0) while reading the first chapter of Douglas
Biber's Variation across speech and writing. To introduce his key
concept of "multidimensional analysis," Biber asks the reader to compare two,
then three, then four different kinds of texts: a conversation, a scientific
paper, a panel discussion, and a narrative. First he uses two separate
continuums, then he represents one type of discourse difference with a y-axis
and the other with an x-axis.... Oh! It's too hard to explain it all here, but I
was reading this chapter when I was planning this Web site, and it seemed like
an interesting way to represent the different ways language is used on the
Internet. There's more I could add about other things that
influenced the design of the "Language and the Internet" Web site, but I hope
the examples I've given are enough to suggest the ways in which reading,
writing, and Web design were coming together for me. Soon, I was searching the Internet for a fitting
image of a compass. The next step in my planning happened when I found a compass
with four different colors. I was almost ready to write! The four colors gave me
a design idea, a visual representation of four categories that seemed to me to
be a way to make connections between different theories about language and the
Internet. "Ah-ha!" I remember thinking, "the site could be a giant Cartesian
grid, the axes representing two of Biber's dimensions. And on the color-coded
quadrants I could plot specific Internet situations or environments as they are
described in David Crystal's book Language and the Internet, and
by others in other places." So far though, I was just talking to myself. I
started writing -- scratching away with a pencil in my notebook -- an
introduction to these theories and the design of the "Language and the Internet"
Web site. At the same time, I was having a technical problem. The image of
the compass had colors on the inside of the circle, and I wanted to make it look
like these colors extended a few screens in all directions from the middle of
the screen where the compass would be. Without getting too technical here, I think it's
useful to explain that my first solutions didn't look good enough for me. The
colors immediately around the compass didn't exactly match the colors in the
outer parts of each quadrant. Finally, I decided to use Photoshop to split the
image of the compass into four parts. Why am I explaining all of this? Well,
it's significant because the technical solution of dividing up the compass gave
me an idea for writing. I heard myself saying (to myself), "Why not write four
different versions of an introduction to the ideas behind the design of this Web
site? And you could make each introduction more or less fit the Internet
environment or language dimension represented by that quadrant!" So that's what I'm in the process of doing.
First, I created a hypertext essay that takes advantage of some of the
multimedia possibilities of the World Wide Web -- sound, text, image, links. You
can find this essay by clicking on the link in the blue part of the compass.
After I finish this message, I plan to write an e-mail to all of you,
introducing you to this summer's Web site. In that e-mail, I'll include links to
student samples that might show what discourse differences on the
Internet are all about. This correspondence will be copied and linked to the red
section of the compass. By the end of the first week of our work together, I'll
add another link under the yellow part of the compass. This link will take you
to a transcript of a chat session we will have had about the theory and design
of the "Language and the Internet" Web site. Finally, you'll find the
Nicenet message that you are reading now copied and linked to the green part of
the compass. I know that many of the theories and details
that I've included in this message need more examples and fuller
explanations. I hope the other introductions linked to the compass help to
clarify some of what I've mentioned briefly here. I have three reasons for
posting this message. First, I wanted to tell this story of my braided processes
of reading, writing, and Web design to suggest the kinds of experiences with
composing for the Web that we want you to have this summer. We want each of you
to feel the dialectical power of composing words for a Web design and designing
a Web page with important content. Second, and more generally, I offer this story
of my thinking as one example of how the Internet changes our ways with words.
In addition to writing for the Web, you will also be experiencing the power of
new forms of language this summer in chat rooms, on bulletin boards, and through
e-mail! Finally, I hope this message can serve as an
example of the kinds of reflective writing we want you to do this summer. You
don't have to write a Bible like this one every time, but by making your
thinking visible, you will contribute to our learning community this summer. I
welcome any response to this message, and I look forward to reading your process
stories!
